The overall concept was good. i lacked some illustration and more details. The slide with the example of a child being the user of pornography was good. overall good idea to do this project on cyber sex, i simply expected more details ion teh connectivity with people accross the world.
Your PowerPoint about cybersex was interesting. The speaker notes explained in good detail the PowerPoint.
Personally, I think that you can explain much more about this subject. You can think for example about the addiction of cybersex. You mentioned something, but I think you can explain this in further detail such as what the consequences are and how you can avoid it. And what about future cybersex?
I also expected to see more photos. By making a combination of text and some ‘surprising’ or ‘shocking’ photos about cybersex you can astonish the reader. In this way, the reader will remember the information better because the reader has an image with the information he/she red.
Information was nice to know about cybersex, and powerpoint was well put together.
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The overall concept was good. i lacked some illustration and more details. The slide with the example of a child being the user of pornography was good.
ReplyDeleteoverall good idea to do this project on cyber sex, i simply expected more details ion teh connectivity with people accross the world.
well done!
Ingrid Hodge
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Hello Daniel,
ReplyDeleteYour PowerPoint about cybersex was interesting. The speaker notes explained in good detail the PowerPoint.
Personally, I think that you can explain much more about this subject. You can think for example about the addiction of cybersex. You mentioned something, but I think you can explain this in further detail such as what the consequences are and how you can avoid it.
And what about future cybersex?
I also expected to see more photos. By making a combination of text and some ‘surprising’ or ‘shocking’ photos about cybersex you can astonish the reader. In this way, the reader will remember the information better because the reader has an image with the information he/she red.
Kind regards,
Sabina Becirovski
08083290
ES4-4b